I LIVE IN FEAR
I fear from
what is unknown,
I fear from
the fact that I have now grown.
I fear the
one that is unfolding,
I fear the
loss of the ones I am holding.
I fear the
smile on my face,
I fear the
time and its pace.
I fear the
wrongs of the past,
I fear the
spell it might cast.
I fear each
step I take,
I fear the
decisions I make.
I fear the
loss of my power,
I fear the
blessings he may no longer shower.
I fear I may
lose myself,
I fear
knowing my true inner self.
Very nice Radhika. i love it... just drink due...darr k aage jeet hai :p
ReplyDeleteBTW hats off .. good job
Haha tks a ton! KK
Deletewill do dat!
I fear ill die one day..
ReplyDeleteSo lets live like happy n gay!!
Nice lines...miss Kamra
Yes surely DJ...M doing dat!
DeleteOhh wow!! Ur on a roll totally ;)
ReplyDeleteSo simple and yet so vivid! I can so relate with it.
"I fear from the fact that now i am a grown up"
I just loved reading it..didnt want it to end. So mam please write more often so that i can get many more such reading treats :D
Thank u soo much aditi! U r such an inspiration!
DeleteYou have for sure earned a regular visitor fr ur blog after this!
ReplyDeleteN I am soo glad abt it!
DeleteAwesome As Always :)
ReplyDeleteThank u maam!
Deletesupercool,its really awesome
ReplyDeleteTks a ton!
Deletegood work. keep it up rini :)
ReplyDeleteThank u pidy!
DeleteGood job Radhika!! Really like it and the best thing is I could relate it with my life. Keep it up.
ReplyDeleteTks a ton! am glad u did...I wrote did one while interning at Mumbai!
DeleteSweet it is... but if you are welcoming some critics honestly... try n be more vocal n relate things, telling thing is one way... relating them is better! Adding to that, while you know where you lack, you are good with what your strength is! Just in case you are not writing the poem for urself but the public, it must have a conclusion, so try and add one (a happy one) in the end, you see let the motive be a purpose where people can not only relate but can also find a solution to it :) :) All the Best!
ReplyDeleteSurely sir will keep in mind next time! Value ur comments!
Deleteso meaningful...so proud of you..keep it up.....god bless you..all d best..
ReplyDeleteThank u so much maam!
Deletenice n meaningful... 3rd stanza is juz too gud...
ReplyDeleteTks a ton! I like it too!
Deletenice one radhika :)
ReplyDeleteTks a ton trisha!
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