Monday, 14 October 2013

I LIVE IN FEAR


I fear from what is unknown,
I fear from the fact that I have now grown.

I fear the one that is unfolding,
I fear the loss of the ones I am holding.

I fear the smile on my face,
I fear the time and its pace.

I fear the wrongs of the past,
I fear the spell it might cast.

I fear each step I take,
I fear the decisions I make.

I fear the loss of my power,
I fear the blessings he may no longer shower.

I fear I may lose myself,
I fear knowing my true inner self.


24 comments:

  1. Very nice Radhika. i love it... just drink due...darr k aage jeet hai :p

    BTW hats off .. good job

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  2. I fear ill die one day..
    So lets live like happy n gay!!

    Nice lines...miss Kamra

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  3. Ohh wow!! Ur on a roll totally ;)
    So simple and yet so vivid! I can so relate with it.
    "I fear from the fact that now i am a grown up"
    I just loved reading it..didnt want it to end. So mam please write more often so that i can get many more such reading treats :D

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    1. Thank u soo much aditi! U r such an inspiration!

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  4. You have for sure earned a regular visitor fr ur blog after this!

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  5. supercool,its really awesome

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  6. good work. keep it up rini :)

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  7. Good job Radhika!! Really like it and the best thing is I could relate it with my life. Keep it up.

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    1. Tks a ton! am glad u did...I wrote did one while interning at Mumbai!

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  8. Sweet it is... but if you are welcoming some critics honestly... try n be more vocal n relate things, telling thing is one way... relating them is better! Adding to that, while you know where you lack, you are good with what your strength is! Just in case you are not writing the poem for urself but the public, it must have a conclusion, so try and add one (a happy one) in the end, you see let the motive be a purpose where people can not only relate but can also find a solution to it :) :) All the Best!

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    1. Surely sir will keep in mind next time! Value ur comments!

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  9. so meaningful...so proud of you..keep it up.....god bless you..all d best..

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  10. nice n meaningful... 3rd stanza is juz too gud...

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